[FFmpeg-devel] [PATCH] Help poor git-n00b users to git-clone ffmpeg

[Ronald S. Bultje]

Hi,

On Fri, Feb 4, 2011 at 5:40 AM, Stefano Sabatini
<stefano.sabatini-lala at poste.it> wrote:
> On date Friday 2011-02-04 00:50:54 -0900, Lou Logan encoded:
>> On Fri, 4 Feb 2011 09:25:09 +0100
>> Stefano Sabatini <stefano.sabatini-lala at poste.it> wrote:
>>
>> > On date Thursday 2011-02-03 15:55:36 -0900, Lou Logan encoded:
>> > > On Fri, 4 Feb 2011 01:46:29 +0100
>> > > Stefano Sabatini <stefano.sabatini-lala at poste.it> wrote:
>> > >
>> > > > Index: src/download
>> > > > ===================================================================
>> > > > --- src/download ? ? ? ?(revision 540)
>> > > > +++ src/download ? ? ? ?(working copy)
>> > > > @@ -67,6 +67,15 @@
>> > > > ?</tbody>
>> > > > ?</table>
>> > > >
>> > > > +<p>
>> > > > +In order to use the standard Git client to check out the source
>>
>> I would prefer something like:
>>
>> To use Git to retrieve the source code:
>>
>> It's a nit but shorter and more clear in my opinion. Sorry, I meant to
>> mention this in my first message. Otherwise the HTML structure looks
>> good to me with the update.
>
> What about:
>
> To use the standard Git client to retrieve the source code:
>
> or
>
> You can retrieve the source code with the standard Git client with the
> command:

"... through the standard Git client by using the (following) command:"

(2x "with" isn't really pretty.)

Ronald