[MPlayer-cvslog] CVS: main/DOCS/tech release-howto.txt,1.4,1.5

[The Wanderer]

Roberto Togni CVS wrote:

> +- build the HTML docs from XML sources; then cleanup
> +    make html-chunked; make releaseclean

The other 'header' lines end with a colon; this one doesn't. Also, I'd
prefer a comma to a semicolon here, because "then cleanup" couldn't
stand as a sentence on its own. Thirdly, "clean up" should be two words.

>  Somehow get Diego to write a news entry for the release, and update the
>  source file of dload.html and commit it. Test it, it's sometimes buggy
> -(broken links etc).
> +(broken links etc). Update also translated versions of dload.html

Either "Also, update" or "Update likewise". Also, missing period at the
end of the sentence.


> +Add the new release version to bugzilla page.
> +
> +Update relase version in #mplayer topic

Typo: "release"

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